Thursday, April 17, 2008

Da Aina Sonnet

Flying between the sunshine and the sea
And now with trees sway in the clearly breeze
Hawaiian islands why can't we just be
The eight islands of the Hawaiian chain

With tons of haoles bringing their sunscreen
Number fifty in the line, which is the state
The taro and the poi that is so clean
The sun and beach oh baby it just waits

Leave the Hawaiian country lands alone
The poly's are the founders of the land
Queen Liliuokalani had the throne
The lava rocks cooled and turned into sand

Kamehameha was the noble king
All in all we are under his noble wing

1 comment:

Analia's School Blog said...

Good job. However read your first stanza out loud, there are a few things that don't really sound right. Also I believe that you mean "Pali" not poly. By making those few corrections it'll be awesome.